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Hi everybody!

I hope that you’re OK. Today I write about a photograph that I like it. First, I love took pictures for the future and remember about those moments. The pictures can transmit many feelings.

The picture that I chose now was token in Vilches Alto, a place in the foothills of The Andes, in a splendid nature that I love.

 this picture I appear in a place known like “Los Pozones”, because is in the torrent of the Maule’s River making cascades and deep pools. My boyfriend took the picture in January of 2011 in a journey with my family (parents, sister and grandmother). This day we went there everybody, going up and going down through gullies. Yes, it isn’t a place easy to arrive, but its beauty worth. I remember I was the first in arrive this place that morning, and my family with my boyfriend were help my grandmother go down with so much difficulty, jaja.

I like this picture because I appear like a little person in the vast nature, in a wonderful landscape, and the moment I remember with happiness and the nostalgia of came back to Vilches Alto and those moments.

Well, Have a great weekend!

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Hi everybody!

I hope that you’re OK. Today I (T, will) write about a photograph that I like it (WW, me). First, I love took pictures for the future and remember about those moments. The pictures can transmit many feelings.

The picture that I chose (WW, choose) now (λ, it) was token (T, taken) in Vilches Alto, a place in the foothills of The Andes, in a splendid nature that I love.

I this picture I appear in a place known like “Los Pozones”, because is in the torrent of the Maule’s River making cascades and deep pools. My boyfriend took the picture in January of 2011 in a journey with my family (parents, sister and grandmother). This day we went there everybody, going up and going down through gullies. Yes, it isn’t a place easy to arrive, but its beauty worth. I remember I was the first in (WW, to) arrive this place that morning (WE, place in te morning), and my family with my boyfriend were help my grandmother go down with so much difficulty, jaja.

I like this picture because I appear like a little person in the vast nature, in a wonderful landscape, and the moment I remember with happiness and the nostalgia (WW, nostalgic) of came (WW, come) back (WE, to go back) to Vilches Alto and those moments.

Well, Have a great weekend!

Learn, learn !

Hello  classmate!

Today I´m going to talks about something I´d like to learn to do.  Really there are many things I´d would like to learn but a lot of I can´t do for many reasons, for example, the money, the time and dedication. But this I prefer be realist and don’t much dream. However, I always do the things I propose.  

In this moment I don´t have many time but I really like to learn sing because I love the music but my voice don´t accompany me. I love the soul music and gospel, my favorites gospel singers James Brown moreover Aretha Franklin and I´d like sing such as she. Perhaps, don´t have her voice because is really fabulous but at least to reach one tone. But also to sing I would like to learn others languages because there are many beautiful songs in others languages like English, French and Italian. Then the second I would like to learn is Italian for the music and for the movies too. Sometimes I watch “The Goodfather” movie (really, I watch this, always. Is my favorite movie) and I love as speaks the women Italian is very expressive and sensual and I hope to visit Italy because the most important artist lived in there such as Mondigliani.

Then for the moment I would like to learn to sing and Italian language and a lot of things!!

See you.

Regards.