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Hi everybody!

I hope that you’re OK. Today I write about a photograph that I like it. First, I love took pictures for the future and remember about those moments. The pictures can transmit many feelings.

The picture that I chose now was token in Vilches Alto, a place in the foothills of The Andes, in a splendid nature that I love.

 this picture I appear in a place known like “Los Pozones”, because is in the torrent of the Maule’s River making cascades and deep pools. My boyfriend took the picture in January of 2011 in a journey with my family (parents, sister and grandmother). This day we went there everybody, going up and going down through gullies. Yes, it isn’t a place easy to arrive, but its beauty worth. I remember I was the first in arrive this place that morning, and my family with my boyfriend were help my grandmother go down with so much difficulty, jaja.

I like this picture because I appear like a little person in the vast nature, in a wonderful landscape, and the moment I remember with happiness and the nostalgia of came back to Vilches Alto and those moments.

Well, Have a great weekend!

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Hi everybody!

I hope that you’re OK. Today I (T, will) write about a photograph that I like it (WW, me). First, I love took pictures for the future and remember about those moments. The pictures can transmit many feelings.

The picture that I chose (WW, choose) now (λ, it) was token (T, taken) in Vilches Alto, a place in the foothills of The Andes, in a splendid nature that I love.

I this picture I appear in a place known like “Los Pozones”, because is in the torrent of the Maule’s River making cascades and deep pools. My boyfriend took the picture in January of 2011 in a journey with my family (parents, sister and grandmother). This day we went there everybody, going up and going down through gullies. Yes, it isn’t a place easy to arrive, but its beauty worth. I remember I was the first in (WW, to) arrive this place that morning (WE, place in te morning), and my family with my boyfriend were help my grandmother go down with so much difficulty, jaja.

I like this picture because I appear like a little person in the vast nature, in a wonderful landscape, and the moment I remember with happiness and the nostalgia (WW, nostalgic) of came (WW, come) back (WE, to go back) to Vilches Alto and those moments.

Well, Have a great weekend!